Drafts for my Magazine Advert

I have drawn a draft for my magazine advert, which has been influenced by my album cover, and my primary and secondary research. 

I am planning on making my album cover very simplistic, with a white background, and minimal text. I will use the same pictures from my album's front cover, laid out in a similar way. At the top of the page I will write the release date in clear, block capitals. Beneath that will be the pictures, and beneath that will be the rest of the text. First of all I will have the band name, in the same colour and font used on the album cover, then underneath will be the album title, also in the same colour and font it was written in on the album front cover. Below that will be some test saying 'the new album' and the names of two successful singles from the album. Underneath that will be 5-star ratings of the album.